I like the story this photo tells, but it's a bit too blurry.

Cool photo, lots to take in!

It ain't flying for me, sorry!

Don't just see anything that looks particularly interesting in the composition.
What where you actually thinking?

Slicha! I am sorry for having said this so blundly but sometimes it can also help. Maybe if you give a better background about the place and what you where thinking with your composition it can help the viewer/audience. In Israel there are so many nice buildings and places to use for your compositions so just go for it! Lehitraot!

seems familiar to me ^_^ I agree with moserArtist though - I think you should have concentrated on something here - overall it's not working - you better focus on something. I understand your attempt to express the atmosphere - but you should also think of composition,colors,focus,etc..Keep it up ^_-

Yep! I agree with Patrick too. Nothing on the composition has the power to work as main subject, its a bit overexposed, too much stuff like cables and AC machines. Maybe if you placed the camera a bit lower, adjusted the f value and the shutter speed as well as the exposure compensation, and rotate a little to the right to show more of the street, giving a bit of perspective\dimension to the composition.

sry.... i'm with moser on this

Yep, me too.

Agree with Vasco

you got skills dude! keep posting !

there is something missing indeed...maybe a person sitting on that bank...
probably only another angle would help here. try to shoot only the blue door from right in front,...just an idea - you would get nice textures and a good contrast...

this composition doesn't work for me either, I'm sorry.

Too many things inside the picture, IMO. If you focus you attention and viewer attention on something particular it is surely better.

lots going on in this photo which I personally like!